cloudskater's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

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I like your vocals and lyrics here! Your voice has a very pleasant quality and though the delivery isn't quite professional in parts, it's in a totally charming way and actually adds to the song I think. I like how your vocals are very clear in the mix, though I'd maybe push them back juuuuust a DB or two? Idk, just some first impressions. I think I can hear the reverb on your voice, but maybe bring the reverb a little forward in the mix, just a tad.

On the topic of reverb, I think the piano in the intro needs some. My mind wants that to be DRENCHED in it, but that might be a bit extreme, haha.

I really like this track! Good job!

HiddenVris responds:

Thank you for your feedback and for listening to my song! Glad you liked it! :)

[b*tchday]

I love this so much. Not even that into vocaloid but this made me chuckle, it's also well performed overall.

[Rock dash]

While the mixing could use work, I really like some of the synth choices here!

[Dyre - Veil]

This is interesting! As a fan of punk stuff who makes punk-ish music myself sometimes, I can see the potential you've got here. While the drums sound fake and plastic-y, I can tell the guitar is very competently played and I like what I'm hearing. That said, I feel there should be more rythem guitar while the main riff is happening. Instead of having the main riff in the left and the rythem in the right, why not have the rythem in both left and right (different takes of course) and the lead in the centre of the mix? That's how it's usually done.

Regardless, interesting attempt! Keep at it, as I can tell you have potential!